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Blood and tears

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Blood and tears
don't hold it in
don't hold back
just gush and pour and splatter
and trickle into me
I'll be your sponge
yellow and holey
hold as much as I can
don't care if I burst at the seams
as long as you still hope
please have apathy for self-appearance
writhe and kick and shout
as long as you get that arrow out
I want it to be worth it
worth all the blood and tears.
Well I was gonna draw a loverly picture for this one but I left the computer for like five minutes and my picture was gone with no saved file D:

I showed this to some classmates and their eyes got all big when they read it and when they were finished they said, "That's creepy!!"
Yup. that's just how I roll :B

Comments, faves, and other feedback fill me with unutterable joy :D :D :D
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MWBlueWolf's avatar
That is creepy, but it's also really deep. If you are able to cause any sort of reaction in an audience, then you have skill as a writer. :meow: